Final Draft Reflection

1. How did your final draft turn out?

Personally, I feel like my final draft went really well. I really put a lot of effort into it. Mostly because I could really relate to the poem. I have family in the system for things they didn't do. However, the best work comes from the most passion.

2. What did you work on from your previous drafts?

I added about 2-3 sentences to each meaty paragraphs, trying to relate my topics to reality.

3. Overall, what was difficult; what was easy for this assignment?

Honestly, the only difficult thing I had while writing this analysis, was keeping the word count under or equal to the maximum amount. I didn't find anything else difficult, because I had so many things I wanted to talk about, and the more you have the better. What I found easy for this assignment was being able to relate the poem back to reality.

4. Overall, what are your strengths ; weaknesses on this essay?

My strengths and my weaknesses are the same thing. I have strengths in being able to write so much because I have so many ideas rushing through my head, however, I need to find a good medium for where to stop because I just keep writing.

5. Finally, if you had more time, what would you work on more to improve this essay?

Honestly, I wouldn't fix anything. I think I did a great job with this analysis.

6. Look at rubric on class blog.
- What 3 things do you think you will get top points on?
- What 3 things do you think you will lose points on?

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